Fion's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Card Trick]

This was quite good.

Your drawing of hands turned out quite good, but as a suggestion what you used for your final product of the hands should more likely be your first draft. What you should do is draw them like that then go through and trace them and smooth it out several times until it looks really smooth. Music fitted very well, card trick was pretty cool too. Only one nit pick I have, the title on the preloader with the red outline around black and grey colours? it made me want to puke simple is sometimes better.

[The Real Humpty Dumpty]

Very well done

First I was thinking oh shit this is gonna be some crap animator trying to make something like little red riding hood and it turning out really crap( little red riding hood is an animtion on this site that is quite good if you didnt know that). But you surprised me greatly. The first animation in a long time that managed great quality with short length. Good work and I'll be watching out for more work by you.

[OIP: Ep1: Wisdom]

It's so real

I love these sort of animations. I read what the last guy said and I dont know what he was talking about, I'm a guy and I'm not a homosexual and I think this is good. I love the style, it's real and people can relate to it, so it's just that sort of "oh yeah haha cool" sort of humour. Your art was also good not extremely fantastic but quite easily above the par of this site (so many people dragging that down these days). Good work keep it up.

[IAMWSP 1: One-Track Minds]

It's okay

You've done alright but you need to improve on some things. For example instead of just throwing your charaters around the screen perhaps animate them walking. The sound could use some work, not the quality but more so some care when recording it so that you cant hear the breathing into the mic. But all up this was not too bad an effort.

Bacteriophage responds:

Thanks. I'm trying some anti-blow-sound methods.

[desertfight/teaser]

Great work.

I see big things from you in the future, your graphics are great. You need to work a bit on body movements, add in a play button and sound but apart from that this was really good.

One other thing, you may not realise this straight away but because in English you read from left to right it's best if you have your text moving across the screen to make it start on the right and move to the left, also make it a bit slower.

[Terror !!]

Question

Was that music just brain stew played really slow?

Your movie was okay

[Darnell Plays With Fire]

What you doing?

What's the point in submitting this, it's on the site for good. I can only guess that you want to see what people actually think of this work. So I'm gonna be honest with you, yeah maybe it was good for an old version of flash, but come on you were 20 then you must have been able to come up with something better. I use flash 5 and can do some pretty cool stuff so I rekon you must have been better than this. Yes I am just trying to compare myself to you now and that's kinda stupid because you made this site which is heaps better than anything I can even imagine.

[YES.]

LOLZ!!!!

dis is teh awesomeness.

Way to pass with the exact same movie, oh umm I mean, I love the newgrounds version of this.

[A bad Day- Emit]

Hmmm

The last guy is right begging for a five is just not the way to go, too cocky. But Nice movie still.

["24 seconds" episode 1]

Sweet

That was absolutly awesome, like there is definatly crap on here that gets made to have that same sort of style but this was perfectly delivered. Nice Work. Hope this passes judgement