Fion's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Grow up]

No.....

The animation was smooth but a child could of animated that and made it look smooth, the sfx fitted but to no actual extent, i didn't get the joke, and if it's ment to be some kind of in joke, keep it between you and whoever else created it, the public do not want to watch shit like this

CorkClock responds:

UGH! A CLOCK!

[Tim Burton's "A Pirate"]

Haha Neat

Pretty funny/interesting style. It's different, I'll give you that. Looking forward to more exciting stuff from you.

ClockRadio responds:

Hayao Miyazaki is next.

[simpsons]

Excellent work

You obviously worked hard on this, despite it not beaming out 'professional animation' it was produced well and came to an excellent end product. The style was different and interesting, the story, doubly so and of course how can I look passed the excellent audio/subtitles/poor english translations.

Overall a great laugh, keep at it!

diogoshx responds:

lol, it´s funny, i haven´t work so hard on this, it´s just a big couple of ideias i have...

[The NG Rules 4]

Appalling

You worked longer on this than on the last two? How long can it take to copy and paste text and then tween it? You've done no work in this, you've provided the audience with nothing.

The only thing someone can get from this is the rules to newgrounds which are already set out on a page on this site which is more readily available and much more aesthetically pleasing.

Additionally the text moves far too fast for anyone who, for god knows why, is actually trying to read it.

If you want to practice flash, practice it and keep it to yourself. If you want to make something for people to view make something they would actually enjoy/benefit from watching.

Nomader responds:

Fion, thanks for your review, and I can understand your anger at this flash. However, let me respond to your comments.

Frankly, I did work on this one harder than the other two... I took longer in choosing the colors of the text. That's the God's honest truth.

I don't expect anyone to be reading this -- if you are, you're missing the point. The point is, that, well, this is junk. I don't consider it anything else. I understand where you're coming from, but next time, please don't act like my intentions in this flash were dishonest and for the sole purpose of ruining your day. Some of us just aren't good with flash.

[Discoball Dance Party!]

Whoa

I'm trippin balls. Love dat shit.

polearmclock responds:

wwwwwwwwooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaahh hhhhhhhhhhhhh mmmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnn

[Fede's MGC Entry]

S'okay

Your art was alright, the plot was quite uninteresting. It was short. I supposed the theme of it didn't appeal to me and hence that is why I don't feel it was good. So I will credit you for your reasonable quality artwork. Well done in that department.

fede1920 responds:

Thanks for reviewing ! I know the script sucks , idk what the hell i was thinking when i made it XD

[Rapping]

Ehh

Your intro was pretty cool, kind of better than the rest of it. The actual rapping part was meh, the walk in was alright for a first attempt fbf but it looked a tad awkward and you shouldn't have looped it. Also once he started rapping you just repeated the same mouth movements rather than actually syncing it to the rapping.

Anyway nothing interesting here, a good piece to get practice on but don't expect people to love it.

y64 responds:

Thnks for the review, i lost interest in the idea any way and the rapping part its meh im still learning and i havea cold il improve =D

[Sonic 1 - Choose Fate]

What's this?

I don't really like this, you just have sonic running through a bunch of scenes for no reason then the user gets to choose the fate of sonic? As if we cared. You haven't really animated anything as it is all mostly tweened sprites and there is a real lack of story line.

I'd say steer clear from sprites for a little while, my general opinion is I don't like any sprite movies but I can respect really good ones as quality work without enjoying them, so I think you have to work really hard to make a sprite movie good.

But enough of that, you clearly show the ability to know how to use flash, try and steer clear of generic themes like sonic, go for something more exciting and interesting to the user. The best test to see if something is good is sit down and watch it, and ask yourself if you think people would find it interesting to watch irrelevant of the amount of effort you put in.

Anyway stick with flash and you could improve greatly.

Paul4990 responds:

Its sonic 1 in a nutshell.