Fion's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hot Coffee]

Hot Coffee by GreyClock

George Cloony has the sluttiest walk of any man alive. Truly a masterpiece, I'd like an espresso now. Every time I'll have a cappuccino I'll remember the pooping sound the foam had. Thank you, GreyClock. George, you will live to regret this! I liked it very much indeed done got dat boi bitch ho And I love the dance George does at the beginning, great stuff. That was perfect I HOPE THIS ISN'T A STRAWBERRYCLOCK MOVIE... I DON'T CARE FOR THOSE. is fifed. im a clock i gotta do it every so often.

The end. - by BootClock

[The Slurpee Show ep. 1]

Yet More wonderful dingen from ZL

Great work here, crisp artwork and awesome dialogue between the two characters. Hoping to see more of these!

- BootClock

[Ketchup Mobile]

Good work with this one

I really liked that it was all really well done, good graphics good emotion and power to it and good sound effects and music. Funny and amazing. Only problems I had with this was the voice of the main commentator was annoying, clearly just been edited but it was annoying to listen to and with the last sequence of it where the music became all suspenseful, although it was really well done it was perhaps a tad slow for my liking.

Nevertheless you did a great job and I hope you get high grades for your assignment.

[Fede's MGC Entry]

S'okay

Your art was alright, the plot was quite uninteresting. It was short. I supposed the theme of it didn't appeal to me and hence that is why I don't feel it was good. So I will credit you for your reasonable quality artwork. Well done in that department.

fede1920 responds:

Thanks for reviewing ! I know the script sucks , idk what the hell i was thinking when i made it XD

[Rapping]

Ehh

Your intro was pretty cool, kind of better than the rest of it. The actual rapping part was meh, the walk in was alright for a first attempt fbf but it looked a tad awkward and you shouldn't have looped it. Also once he started rapping you just repeated the same mouth movements rather than actually syncing it to the rapping.

Anyway nothing interesting here, a good piece to get practice on but don't expect people to love it.

y64 responds:

Thnks for the review, i lost interest in the idea any way and the rapping part its meh im still learning and i havea cold il improve =D

[Sonic 1 - Choose Fate]

What's this?

I don't really like this, you just have sonic running through a bunch of scenes for no reason then the user gets to choose the fate of sonic? As if we cared. You haven't really animated anything as it is all mostly tweened sprites and there is a real lack of story line.

I'd say steer clear from sprites for a little while, my general opinion is I don't like any sprite movies but I can respect really good ones as quality work without enjoying them, so I think you have to work really hard to make a sprite movie good.

But enough of that, you clearly show the ability to know how to use flash, try and steer clear of generic themes like sonic, go for something more exciting and interesting to the user. The best test to see if something is good is sit down and watch it, and ask yourself if you think people would find it interesting to watch irrelevant of the amount of effort you put in.

Anyway stick with flash and you could improve greatly.

Paul4990 responds:

Its sonic 1 in a nutshell.

[In the street]

Really nice

That had good artwork and was well animated. Story line funny, not laugh out loud funny but little chuckle funny and your choice to have no sound apart from the music was good to. I'm not sure the music correctly captured the emotions of the animation but I suppose when you're an animator and not a music composer it's hard to get the right music.

Anyway great stuff, well animated.

Kde777 responds:

You're absolutely right, it started like a crap movie but.. I remade everything and stuff.. it was a disaster xD. thanks

[The Dinosaurs]

Haha, pretty good

Reasonable art, kinda funny too. Would be better if it had a little more animation to it but still you did a good job on it, well lip synced from what I could(wasn't paying too much attention to teh lips), also one great point is the crispness of the audio, good quality, something a lot of people lack. Good work keep it up.