Fion's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[In the street]

Really nice

That had good artwork and was well animated. Story line funny, not laugh out loud funny but little chuckle funny and your choice to have no sound apart from the music was good to. I'm not sure the music correctly captured the emotions of the animation but I suppose when you're an animator and not a music composer it's hard to get the right music.

Anyway great stuff, well animated.

Kde777 responds:

You're absolutely right, it started like a crap movie but.. I remade everything and stuff.. it was a disaster xD. thanks

[Persecutive Justice]

I don't know but

The stupidity of that plus the completely unnecessary accents made this pretty funny. I mean, it's not quality by any regard except that of it's humour. I don't want to suggest ways you could improve because I want to see more stuff in this style but perhaps something like drawing some backgrounds in would improve it.

piconjolover responds:

i can understand how it turned out funny. iill try better animation in the future

[the random fight]

Nah man

Zero story line + fbf lines that don't represent anything + badly rendered sprites =/= success

Sorry, but you'll have to step up the game with something longer, better art and that makes some sense if you want to have people enjoy your work.

rofflawl responds:

its called random 4 a reason

[Wild Cat]

Oh wow

That was amazing

brysew responds:

Thanks, Fion!

[Walter Joyce]

This is wonderful

Great style and idea, I loved the whole feel of the movie, excellent work.

For two days of work you should be very proud, I am shocked you weren't originally going to upload it.

Only one issue I had was the voice-over being a little bit too quite just in relation to the other sounds. Apart from that I loved it. Great work.

Masquatto responds:

Well, graphically, I wouldn't consider it up to my standards, and I never had time nor means to make the fix up the audio.

Yeah, I know what you mean by the narration being quiet. The inaudibility of the benefactor actually led me to throw in those captions. If I can get around to it, I might fix that.

Thanks for the review. :)

[Commandos 1]

This wasnt so good

I mean it has some potential but really could be improved a lot. Using actuall camera angles besides one would be a start more detail into characters and surroundings would also help. It was not such a great animation.

tjens responds:

thx anyway im using more camera angels this time

[Crazeh!]

Nicely Done

It takes a fair amount of style to pull of a good stick fight animation short and you are among the few who can actually do it, congrats, nice job.

Cosmoseth responds:

<3

[IAMWSP 1: One-Track Minds]

It's okay

You've done alright but you need to improve on some things. For example instead of just throwing your charaters around the screen perhaps animate them walking. The sound could use some work, not the quality but more so some care when recording it so that you cant hear the breathing into the mic. But all up this was not too bad an effort.

Bacteriophage responds:

Thanks. I'm trying some anti-blow-sound methods.

[ButtMastas I]

IT was good...

I liked it but i wouldnt say it was great. It just lacked any depth at all but still the graphics were fairly good.

MushroomT responds:

what?

[Elastic beads Simulation]

Nice

IT was good probably not what we wanna see on New grounds but cool effect.

I wanna learn how to do that

Max529 responds:

i am going to put an article in my site about doing this...i ll let u know when i finish it....